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In addition to the legal articles, KnifeUp has knife review articles which makes $600 to $1,400 a month via Amazon Associates. KnifeUp also makes $200-$500 per month from AdSense as well. This makes KnifeUp’s total monthly income about $1,200 a month.

这是flippa的原文一小段,我突发奇想想测试一下自己改写文章的速度
Also, we mention about legal article, Knifeup can make 600 to 1400 dollar as knife review articles sites via Amazon associate program. Knifeup also can earn 200-500 dollar as well, that’s totally up 800 dollar, mostly around 1200 dollar a month, sweet!

 

dollars 复数

adsense站勉强可以用,reviews不行

底子还不错,不过关键点没有抓住,有两句话都有问题,这个是机器都能判断的。
英语每句如果没有连接词,只能有一个谓语动词。
其它都还挺好

 

这个语法令人捉急阿。。。
不能用逗号隔开第一二句,它们是两个完整的句子,得用句号。
and 和 as well重复, monthly 和 a month 重复
后面that前不能加逗号,而且that只能指代前面的某一个名词,不能指代整个句子,所以that指代不清阿。所以想表示一个结果只能用下面的“逗号+动名词”的形式。
专有名词前面得加the,要不然人家看半天不知道knifeup是个什么东西。。。the Knifeup
另外第一句也不好改写,lz想用想用as的话,正规书写是“As A,B怎么怎么样。” as一般放句首以防引发歧义,A和B得是同一个东西,这是as常用的一种对称的结构,比如:As a knife review articles site, the Knifeup can make 600 to 1400 dollar via Amazon associate program and earn 200-500 dollars through adsense, amounting to $1,200 a month.

 

Beside the legal article we’ve just mentioned, KinfeUp is a website that making 1200 US dollars a month! Pretty amazing isn’t it? Let’s see how KinfeUp  earn these much money. First of all, KinfeUp makes around $200 to $500 from Google Adsense monthly. In additions, KinfeUp’s main income is from writing review articles for Amazon. It helps them making $600 to $1400 a month.

 

Apart from the legal aritcles, KnifeUp also earn about $600 to $1400 out of Amazon Associates program and $200-$500 from AdSense, which makes about $1,200 for KnifeUp each month.

 

 

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